Score: 8

"Pretty good."

submission: Jim and Pals Shorts: Ep 8

date: October 9, 2008

Animation/Graphics - Very simple drawings and animation. Nothing too new or exciting here. Colors and everything was fine. I think the animation was very clean and smooth and so were the drawings, but at the same time like I said kind of plain and boring.

Story - Sadly I don't understand a lot of it because I don't understand flash whatsoever and I have never heard of Koolmoves or Koolmovies or whatever it was. Is this program simple to use? I think flash is hard as hell so if if this is any easier to use then I wouldn't mind giving it a try. You had a nice amount of humor in it though for how short the submission was.

Audio - Good background music and sound effects in this flash. You also had some good voice actors here. I can't think of anything else to say about the audio section of this flash.

Overall - A decent flash with a decent amount of humor. A bit short, but not too short to make it bad.

C52

~ Review Request Club ~

Score: 10

"*Starts slow clap.*"

submission: [SG] TFAS Preview

date: October 3, 2008

Animation/Graphics - Very very good man. I was impressed by all of the drawings and the animation that you had throughout the entire submission. It was very smooth, the colors were good, the pictures were good, the background was good, etc.. Nothing really to criticize here.

Story - Isn't the Shades Gang a spam group? I guess I was mistaken because this isn't anywhere close to being spam and now that I look at some of your other stuff it's all pretty good. And it's only a preview so I can't wait to see the entirety of this. Some simple humor was put in and a lot of action for a preview. Really good man.

Audio - Not everyones favorite song, but I don't mind it. Also, it went very well with the theme of the movie. Good job all around here with your choice of audio.

Overall - A very good preview and I can't wait to see the final version of it.

C52

~ Review Request Club ~

Score: 2

"Oh no >.<"

submission: darknessdweller wuz here

date: October 3, 2008

This is absolutely terrible blah blah blah (continues angry rant and then looks at the date of the submission) Ah, the 15? A clock day submission? ;) Now I understand. :D

Animation/Graphics - Nothing really except for a line moving around. Of course the line moving around was done decently. Nothing really here at all though. The animation that you would expect from a clock day submission.

Story - AIRPLANE EXPLODES? AMIRITE? Haha, nothing here either, but I can't really review a clock day submission like I would any other submission because there really isn't suppose to be a story to them right? Randomness I guess, but it needs to be more random with flashing lights. >:]

Audio - NONE? You need some audio man. This is the only thing that I had against your clock day submission. You really need to add some audio even if it is a spam submission. I mean the audio can sometimes make spam submissions funny or worthwhile.

Overall - The average clock day submission really. The only thing that I had against it was it's lack of content and the lack of audio that you had. Better luck next year I guess.

C52

~ Review Request Club ~

Score: 8

"Very good."

submission: In my mind

date: October 3, 2008

Animation/Graphics - The animation and graphics weren't always so good in the entire animation, but I think that was the style that you were going for when you made this flash. The overall quality of the animation and graphics were pretty good though. I like how your animation ran smoothly and was timed with the audio in the background, which is something that I will probably express again in the audio section of my review.

Story - A nice random dream like flash here that really shows how random and wild dreams can be sometimes. The menu was pretty cool and original. Maybe it should of been centered a bit more, but overall the story and content of the flash was pretty good. It could of been just a bit longer in my opinion.

Audio - A good choice of audio just because it went so well with the animation at hand. Right from the beginning to the end the animation matched up very well with the audio. That must have taken a lot of work and timing to do.

Overall - A nice short flash, which was done pretty well overall. I think this was deserving of an award. Maybe it would have won on a different day and the day that you submitted it there were several other flashes that were very good at the same time.

C52

~ Review Request Club ~

Score: 7

"Decent flash submission."

submission: MD08: Cliffs of Dover

date: September 29, 2008

Animation/Graphics - Good animation and graphics here. You can't usually complain about drawings or anything else like that on Madness flashes since they are pretty much all the same. The animation was good and smooth. I really couldn't find anything wrong with it at all. Maybe have him moving around stage more could of made it a bit better, but with that it may have been a bit more challenging due to the fact that it would be more animation, plus the spotlight would have to follow him around.

Story - A nice nonviolent flash, which is common on Madness Day very often. I'm happy that you had the little intersection after awhile in the song because that's a pretty lengthy song and we would of probably got bored, but I just don't know if that's what I would of done for the break up. I don't know exactly would of worked good there, but I just think that maybe trying something else there would make it a bit better. A couple of things that could of made it a bit better could be to add the drummer and some of the other band along with the guitarist. Again, that would make the flash more difficult to make since it would add more animation, but it's something to think about.

Audio - Great audio. I'm a sucker for anything that was played on a guitar and anything that's fast or heavy. That may be because a couple of my friends are good at guitar and one of my roommates played GH3 all year last year. (He has dropped out >.<) The only thing I think you could of added was maybe the sound of a crowd cheering him or something like that.

Overall - A nice flash and a good change of pace of regular Madness submissions, but could of been a bit better with a couple of things.

C52

~ Review Request Club ~

Score: 4

"Ouch my ears. >.<"

submission: flight of the WTF?!

date: September 28, 2008

Animation/Graphics - A pretty decent piece of animation here, but it was still kind of rough. The drawing was also a lot better then anything that I could do. Something tells me that you wanted it to be black and white, which looks pretty good to be honest, but try adding some color to the background and characters and see how it looks. If it looks better black and white like you have it then keep it like that, but if not you may want to add some color to it and resubmit it or edit it to see what it looks like. The style like I said before was very rough. The first man could of been drawn a lot better, but again if you wanted the style like that so be it.

Story - Flight of the WTF?! is a pretty good title for the submission and it was a WTF type of flash. I understand that it was suppose to be a short animation, but still about 10 or 15 more seconds would of made it better in my opinion. Still it's a nice little random piece of work. The credits were nice and you may want to think about using that as your signature credits for most of your animations or at least something like that.

Audio - The voice acting was done very nicely, but that audio at the end just about made my errors bleed. I say scrap that audio and use something completely different in the future and it might be a good idea to even put different audio on this submission itself.

Overall - The flash could of used a little bit of work on it's animation, graphics, story, and audio. If all of these sections were fixed up a bit then this would of probably received a better score. Congrats on having your first submission pass and good luck in the future.

Score: 8

"Pretty good."

submission: Nothing In My Way Collab

date: September 28, 2008

Animation/Graphics - All of the animation itself was done very nicely and I am impressed by it. The drawing went from very good to very poor at times though. This almost made me think that the style that you chose here was on purpose though. If it was then I guess nothing can really be fixed here, but if it wasn't on purpose then you could of worked on the drawing itself on may parts of the flash.

Story - A nice music video if I may say so myself. ^^ It had a nice pre-loader and very nice animated credits! The main part of the flash was well done and it went pretty well with the music. I couldn't find the Easter Egg the first time through and didn't feel like watching through it again to find it though. :(

Audio - The song went very well with the animation at hand and that is really the main point of a music video so this flash accomplished what it was sent out to do in terms of audio. Good job.

Overall - A pretty good flash. Too bad the other person couldn't get their part done, but it was still at pretty good length with the people that you did have.

C52

~ Review Request Club ~

Score: 10

"Amazing."

submission: Happy Birthday Corky!

date: September 24, 2008

You've really captured the feeling that Corky52 should bring to people. That feeling is a big powerful cock that puts people in fear of their life. >.< Thanks for the happy birthday flash man. I really liked it. :D

C52

Score: 10

"Omg awesome."

submission: Corky52's Birthday Collab

date: September 24, 2008

Animation/Graphics - This was the best animated movie I think I have ever seen on newgrounds. I mean I don't see how this couldn't be in the top 50 let alone the top 10 in flash submissions. :D Yoshi, yours was awesome, top work right there. MinusNick, you're just about the same with Yoshi. Amazing job. Let's not forget about FamilyGuy05! You three are going to be top animators someday. ;)

Story - MY BIRTHDAY HOW IS IT NOT A 10/10 AND A 5/5? That was friggin sweet. The pre-loader to starts was amazing. I love the picture that you used to fap... I mean the picture that you used on the pre-loader was an awesome choice. I remember taking that picture about a year or two ago. Yoshi, I love how you used the Pacman theme because I was talking to you about how I got bored in class and started to draw pacman stuff. :D MinusNick yours was really awesome also. Ha, again the pictures that you guys used were really funny. FamilyGuy05 added an important part also. What's a birthday flash without a happy birthday song to go along with it?

Audio - You all used great audio selections in your work and it all went along very well with the animation. :)

Overall - Thanks a lot to everyone who made this for me. I made sure I added it to my favorites and all of the authors to my favorites. This is the first gift that I have gotten today and it's much appreciated. Also, to everyone else. I'm 20 today.

C52

Score: 10

"That was awesome. Fucking sweet."

submission: With My Mind's Madness

date: September 24, 2008

Animation/Graphics - Amazing even though a lot of it was incomplete and very rough. I still thought the animation and graphics was a lot better then most of the other stuff that was submitted on Madness Day. I actually kind of liked the sketchy effect that there was, but I would also like to see the final version of it and compare the two.

Story - I think this is an appropriate question to ask why exactly did your flash auto-spawn popups? Someone posted it in the abusive review thread and I explained to them that you were staff on newgrounds and the popups that it spawned weren't really anything too worry about and that they shouldn't mark this to put it under admin. review. Now on to the flash, that was epic. That was such a powerful animation and I really got into the flash. That was awesome man.

Audio - A great selection of audio here and good sound effects. There really isn't much more to say about the audio selection of your submission.

Overall - Even though it was rough it was still an epic flash and really awesome to watch. Deserves a 10/10 and a 5/5.

C52