Score: 7

"I personally didn't like it."

submission: BirdBallz

date: August 2, 2008

Animation/Graphics - I couldn't complain or find anything wrong with the animation or graphics. They were all done pretty well and everything seemed to run smoothly together.

Story - This is really what I didn't like about the game. I know that it's hard to come up with an original game, but I've played sooo many games like this that it's hard to come by one that is any fun or exciting in anyway unless they add something really new to the table, which I didn't think this one did. The controls were easy to use, but I found that there were a lot of glitches in the game as a whole. Times where I would fall uncontrollable or even times where I would disappear in the game. I would then have to restart it. This made the game not so fun to play.

Audio - Something else that I can't complain too much if at all about. Good job all around here.

C52

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Score: 8

"Well..."

submission: Newgrounds: A History

date: August 2, 2008

Animation/Graphics - Pretty good for a slideshow type flash actually. Nothing too great and nothing too exciting, but it got the job done. I personally don't mind the slideshow type flashes as long as they have good information and decent audio.

Story - A lot of information and the flash was actually great in length. It's not the most interesting subject for people, but now and then things do need to be informative instead of fun. Not bad here.

Audio - The audio was all around alright, but you do have to admit that the voice kind of dragged on and made the movie sort of boring.

Overall, not too bad, but could use somethings to spice it up a little.

C52

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Score: 9

"LMAO!"

submission: Secret To A Long Life

date: July 28, 2008

How could this only have a few reviews? I think it's funny as hell and well animated. I surely needs more attention then it has gotten.

Animation/Graphics - Very good stuff here. Great drawing, animation, colors, backgrounds, and pretty much everything else that goes along with animation or graphics. I do have to say that the animation was very simple though and you really didn't have too much going on, but it didn't need to be anything great for this movie.

Story - Very, very short, but that's ok because it was very funny. I actually didn't see the ending coming at all. I know it was suppose to be a short, but some length would of been nice.

Audio - Everything with the audio seemed fine to me. Good sound effects, music, voice acting, etc.. Good job.

Overall, this is a good short submission that needs a little more attention than it has received.

C52

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Score: 6

"Ha."

submission: Lightsaber Showoff

date: July 24, 2008

First, I must say don't listen to the people that are saying put this on youtube. They just don't understand that newgrounds is allowed to have live action scenes exactly like this. Hell I just made a live action star wars movie not too long ago and only got one youtube comment, so I guess I was lucky.

Animation/Graphics - Good, you didn't mess up at all with the lightsaber. Did you use LS Maker? I'm sure you did because I don't know any other program to use for this, but if you used something different what was it?

Story - Sorry, but I do have to rate your movie low because you really didn't have any story. A movie doesn't always need a story, but yours was also very very short and basically had no content in it.

Audio - Good job with the audio here. You synced the lightsaber noises pretty good. I would of liked to saw some star wars music playing in the background though. That could of helped your rating a little.

Overall, keep working with this live action stuff. I like to watch it and I think that it can be interesting if you make a story with it.

C52

Score: 10

"You hit everything perfect."

submission: Abusive Review Guide

date: July 22, 2008

Animation/Graphics - When I review a slides show or other game that's formatted the same way like this then I look for a couple of things to comment about. The first thing was how the colors and the background looked and everything looked perfectly fine to me in that category. I also look to see if the text is the right size just in case someone might have a hard time reading it and this also seemed fine to me. Lastly, I look to see how organized and neat all of the columns and text is and everything again seemed perfectly fine.

Story - Not only was your information here very helpful, but it was also very accurate. I could see this really helping a lot of people out so that's why I plan on linking it to my abusive review guide, which I appreciate you linking here in your flash. You also had a lot of information here and the back buttons were a very nice addition just in case someone wanted to go back through without exiting the flash and replaying it. And just to let everyone know, you can't find all of this stuff written down in the FAQ, so it's very helpful for people who don't understand.

Audio - It's great that you had a song playing on the flash. A song can really add to a flash like this and even greatly improve the score and rating.

Overall, a very good flash that is very helpful. Maybe you need to make more flashes like this. Need any help then just send me a PM. You know I'm always there for help.

C52

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Score: 10

"Good job."

submission: Star Fox: Loopy Battle

date: July 22, 2008

Animation/Graphics - I'm really starting to enjoy your movies and I hope you start too make many more of them. I really like your style of animation so keep up the good work. Just like your last movie I reviewed there wasn't really anyway to improve the animation at all.

Story - Great humor and it kept me entertained throughout the entire thing. I just had a feeling that the loop at the end was going to happen before it actually did though. Good job here.

Audio - Good music, sound effects, and voice overs. Nothing really more to say about that.

Overall, a great job and I'm looking forward to your future animations.

C52

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Score: 8

"Really good for what was there."

submission: SSBB: Pit's Wii Remote

date: July 22, 2008

Animation/Graphics - This is actually really well done in terms of animation. It's actually one of the better jobs I have ever seen done animating so good job there. I couldn't find anything to critique.

Story - Nice little story here, which had some humor in it. I so wish it would of been longer though. I think if it would of been just a bit longer then I would of given your flash a 10/10 rating.

Audio - I couldn't find anything wrong with the audio. Voices, sounds, and music all seemed to be very well done.

Overall, it would of been longer, but other then that almost perfect.

C52

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Score: 10

"A couple of things."

submission: Knife Shorts 1

date: July 22, 2008

First of all 10/10 and 5/5 to return the favor. Also, is that you in the video Murad or is that Scumball?

Animation/Graphics - I know that adding animation to live action isn't the easiest thing as I know from my own experiences in my own flashes. This would of been nice if you could of made the blood more realistic though. Also, the stickmen could of been drawn better. I know stickmen are pretty simple to draw, but it looks like to me that they were really rushed. Next time take more time on the graphics.

Story - I know animations like this don't really involve a story line, but there should of been something else then just a guy holding a knife and killing some stick men. The easiest way to improve the story at all would be just to make the flash a bit longer next time.

Audio - It's nice that you had music playing in the background, but I don't think that would of been my choice of a song. Sound effects would of been a really nice addition too.

Overall, this needs a lot of work, but keep at it.

C52

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Score: 8

"Not too bad."

submission: Ruptonia Trailer

date: July 22, 2008

Animation / Graphics - Not too bad, but honestly very rough at best. This could of been improved simply if the drawings had been done just a bit better. I think that if that was done it would greatly improve the score of your submission.

Story - This is one of the reason you got the rank that you received from me. The story was pretty good and you even added a little humor to it.

Audio - The audio was the other reason that you received the rating from me that you did. The sound effects were pretty good, even if they weren't always timed the best. The voices were very good for the flash and also the music seemed to fit well.

Overall, just improve the graphics and this will be a really good flash.

C52

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Score: 8

"Pretty good!"

submission: Newgrounds Info: Extended

date: July 22, 2008

Animation / Graphics - When I review a game that is made up of menus like this one I usually look at the neatness and how you organized everything in terms of the columns and text. Everything here seemed to be in order and looked pretty good. Pretty good overall here.

Story - Good, the only thing I can see that you could add would be to add a small explanation of how many experience points that are needed to get too each level, how many experience points you needed to get to the old levels, how many B/P points you need to get to get the new B/P, and how many you would of needed to get the old B/P.

Audio - A decent song, but it gets old quite fast. Maybe in future submissions like this include a music menu so the listener can choose what they want.

Overall, a pretty good helpful flash that could use a little bit of improvement.

C52

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