Score: 8

"Not bad."

submission: .::Imagine::.

date: August 8, 2008

Animation/Graphics - Not too bad. I like the style of how everything was drawn out and at times it was a little squiggly like it was being drawn right at the moment. I think that you left it black and white for a reason and I actually think that it looks pretty cool being black and white. You may want to test it out with color too and see how it works though. If it works good with color then you may want to replace it.

Story - I can't comment on the story of something that doesn't have a story right? WRONG, haha. I liked the length of the submission. It wasn't too long or too short. It was interesting enough to keep me watching without getting bored throughout any of it. I think that the title Imagine was pretty fitting for the flash too as this is how your imagination can work some of the times.

Audio - I could comment on how there wasn't any sound effects, but I do think that maybe sound effects would ruin this flash for some reason. Like adding a noise of when the gun shot just might make the flash distracting in a way. I do like the music that you choice though.

Overall, a decent little flash that looked like you worked hard on it. Good job.

C52

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Score: 9

"Really good."

submission: Frankenstein Trailer

date: August 8, 2008

I know that this was a Trailer for your English Class, but do you plan on making an actual movie or series out of it at all?

Animation/Graphics - Very simple most of the time. I could really tell that most of it was rushed like in parts where Frankenstein would turn around, but it was like he was a flat image instead of an actual person if you know what I mean. The backgrounds and drawings were all pretty decent, but again I could tell towards the end of the flash that you were in a hurry because the drawing and backgrounds were really lacking.

Story - A nice little flash, which was of pretty good length. I have to say that the letter was very very funny and that bits and parts of the actual animation made the flash pretty funny. If you were going for humor in this submission then you sure hit it on the nose.

Audio - The voice acting was very good don't get me wrong, but the quality of the sound wasn't always very good. Especially in the part were the voice was reading the letter out loud and there was some static. Not too bad though.

Overall a nice little animation that you made here.

C52

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Score: 4

"Meh."

submission: The Last Hour: Chapter 1

date: August 8, 2008

I accidentally reviewed the other two chapters before I reviewed this one. My bad.

Animation/Graphics - Believe it or not the animation in my opinion was twice as good as part two and three. The other ones looked a lot like spam, but this one actually looked like there was some sort of effort put into them. The drawing and animation of the ship wasn't great, but it wasn't too bad either.

Story - Again, just like the other flashes of yours you make this nice descriptive story and in your flash it's nothing great at all. I mean it's only a ship flying from one side of the screen to the other. And then some sort of fade effect that almost made look like the ship was evaporating or something.

Audio - THANK YOU FOR THE LOVE OF GOD. I'm so happy that I didn't have to listen to those annoying voices again. I think there should be voices on the menu like that, but the ones that you include in your other flashes are so annoying that I preferred it without them. Music was fine like usual.

Overall, this one makes me think that the series isn't spam, but the other ones make me think that it is. I don't really know what to think.

C52

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Score: 7

"Well let's see here."

submission: Quixotic Press Release UE

date: August 8, 2008

Animation/Graphics - The animation and graphics were both pretty well done. Everything seemed to run smoothly and your buttons were well organized. You had an interesting style of drawing if I may say so. All of your characters seemed to be not only very skinny, but also a little too skinny. It was like they were scrunched up or something. I don't know if I exactly liked some of the scenes were there weren't any backgrounds or they really lacked color in general. Some of these things could be worked on in my opinion.

Story - You had several sections to choose from with the buttons and some nice stuff to go along with it. I hope the story turns out well though. What exactly is your story going to be about? I couldn't really tell be the teaser except for one guy is going to fight another guy. etc.. I know it was just a teaser, but it could of also been just a bit longer.

Audio - Good music, but I actually don't remember hearing any sound effects. If they were then nothing really caught me ear. So if there weren't any sound effects of swords, etc.. then you should def. add stuff like that in. If there was then I'm sorry for not noticing it.

Overall, a nice teaser which I hope turns out into a nice movie. Make sure to request reviews from the RRC when you submit the movie.

C52

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Score: 10

"Pretty good."

submission: Newgrounds Flagging Guide

date: August 7, 2008

Animation/Graphics - The buttons were nice the way they were organized and the entire flash was pretty well organized itself. And if I may say so myself you are a great drawer. >.< I know this has been stated in other reviews, but you could of had better color combinations because I almost went cross eyed reading your buttons and text. It seems like none of use can find the good background to these guides.

Story - This was made around the same time that mine was made. WE MUST BE COPYING EACH OTHER. Haha, joking of course. The more of these that are out there the better so there is a better chance of people who don't understand the whistle system to see it. Just like the one I help make you left out some important stuff, but you also had a lot of other stuff covered that most guides don't.

Audio - Decent audio. I really didn't like it though since it got really boring and old fast. I think guides like this should have a menu where you can select different songs to listen to.

Overall, a good guide that will help people out.

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C52

Score: 3

"Well.."

submission: The Last Hour: Chapter 3

date: August 7, 2008

I'm really not going to waste my time writing a helpful reviews, because by reading the other reviews and your author comments to them this whole thing is just a spammy joke. Please don't waste the time of the review request club with submissions like this if you are joking. We want actual flash artists who are looking for helpful reviews.

Animation/Graphics - I could honestly copy and paste everything from my last review except for that this time you did have more animation with the lips moving and the arm moving, which is the only reason you got one more point on the rating from me.

Story - Nothing here, too short, just crap. It needs a lot of work and when I say a lot I mean a lot.

Audio - The voices are shit sorry to tell you, but they did go alright with the animation of the mouths. Not great, but not too bad.

Overall, if this is anywhere near being serious then please put more work into your submissions.

C52

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Score: 2

"Well.."

submission: The Last Hour: Chapter 2

date: August 7, 2008

First I do have to ask you a question. Your you being serious when you made this or were you just fooling around? If your were being serious then I will try to write a helpful review for you, but if you were just messing around then your animation is only a little better then a spam submission at the best.

Animation/Graphics - Well drawings weren't that bad, but they still weren't very good. The text was neat and was very easy to read, but I found that it may have dragged on too long. The text could of went just a little faster because I could read what was there several times over. There wasn't really any animations except for a few things moving now and then, so you made want to include actual animation in your flash next time.

Story - It almost looks like you have an alright story, but the flash doesn't show the story that you told at all. It's like you have this story written out, but you only show a couple of seconds of flash expecting that it covers it and it really doesn't. So it's not the story that needs work it's the flash matching with the story that you need to work on.

Audio - The music was good, but that was the only thing good about the audio of this submission. The voices were absolutely terrible. If these are your voices then you may want to think about having someone voice act for you and if these are a voice actors voice then you need to fire them and get a new one.

Overall, a very poor flash that needs a lot of work to be anywhere close to being good.

C52

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Score: 10

"What can I say? Amazing."

submission: TBBAM Episode 1 - Part 1

date: August 7, 2008

Animation/Graphics - At first I thought that your movie was going to be really shitty and childish just be seeing the opening scenes of your animation. I thought to myself, "Oh boy, someone thinking they are cool because they can animate in squares." I was very wrong as I watched the movie. You had the simple graphics and animation with the squares a long with the more advanced animation and graphics with the background, most movements, other character, etc.. I was impressed with the style since you seemed to make it your own.

Story - Pretty original story if I may say so myself. It was very random too. The first part of the movie is pretty serious except for a few funny messages and jokes now and then. Then all of the sudden with the scene with the mob boss and the main character the plot seemed to twist to a more funny, random movie. Well you may say that the plot twisted just a little before that with the one guy getting shot and then coming back to life.

Audio - Great audio, great music, great sound effects, and pretty much great everything with the audio. The voices seemed to match good with the animation of the mouths and everything was timed pretty well. I really like the pre-loader sound effects, which I notice was the pre-loader for Pico Day, but you just edited it a little.

Overall, a fun movie to watch and I think it deserves more attention then it has received.

C52

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Score: 10

"Ha, very nicely done."

submission: When I'm Running

date: August 2, 2008

Animation/Graphics - I couldn't seem to find anything wrong with the animation or drawings except for they were very simple. You basically used the same thing throughout the entire movie. Maybe you could of added a bit more variety in his running to make it not seem so robot like if that makes any sense.

Story - I think any of us that run can relate to the story of this flash. I personally don't think of dinosaurs, but I tend to think more of track races that I have been in where they were really close and I imagine that I'm in the race. If I thought of any animal chasing me then it would be bees because I'm deadly allergic to bees and just as scared. If that didn't get me running fast then nothing would.

Audio - You had a great variety of audio here so very good in this section.

Overall, a nice short flash in which I know people will be able to relate to.

C52

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Score: 9

"Awesome."

submission: The ghost train

date: August 2, 2008

Animation/Graphics - Great drawing, animation, backgrounds, color, etc.. I do have to admit that the animation was very simple most of the time, but it really didn't need to be anything great in the case of this game. Pretty good all around.

Story - You had a lot of background and a lot of information on everything. You also had a game that was pretty fun and yet at the same time it was a puzzle type game, which I find to be boring now and then.

Audio - This has to be by far my favorite part of your flash. Very good music, sound effects, and I really loved the scary/spooky noises that you used throughout your game. Great job here.

Overall, a pretty good game which might deserve a higher score then it has.

C52

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