Score: 8

"Nice."

submission: Do I eat the...? STWPT

date: August 24, 2008

Animation/Graphics - A great style that I love to see when watching flash submissions on newgrounds. The animation was smooth and the drawings were well done. The colors and backgrounds were also fine.

Story - I won't review on how short it was because after a quick read over the author comments that you have made I realize that this was a part for a collab that wasn't continued for some reason. To bad it wasn't continued. What exactly was the collab about? Overall the flash its self was sort of funny. Well done.

Audio - I thought the audio was fine. The voice was fine and the background music was also fine.

Overall, this would of made a great addition to a collab. Too bad it died out though.

C52

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Score: 8

"Good intro."

submission: Ideal Intro

date: August 24, 2008

I can see why this one got you the job. :) Even though you say no extras on it, I will still review it like I was helping you make it better.

Animation/Graphics - The animation was very smooth and the drawings were very nicely done. The colors were good since it looks like they were suppose to be dark in this flash submission.

Story - Very short, but I didn't allow that to bring your rating down at all for one reason. It's an intro and they are usually suppose to be short. You do get a feeling when watching it though that you don't want to feel when watching an intro. That feeling is that it's over as soon as it starts. I have a small suggestion on what would probably get rid of this feeling. Make the walk more slow and dramatic. That would add several seconds and would get rid of that BOOM ITS DONE feeling that you get when watching it.

Audio - Sadly it has none. Hopefully when it is put into whatever it was made for then the audio will be covered. An intro needs music no matter what though.

Overall, not bad. The suggestion that I made might get rid of that feeling that its over as soon as it starts.

C52

~ Review Request Club ~

Score: 10

"Awesome game."

submission: Bouncy Bob

date: August 23, 2008

You know what? Flashes like these make me write short reviews because there isn't anything wrong with them. >:(

Animation/Graphics - Awesome animation. Really no room for improvement at all in my opinion.

Story - Original? No maybe not, but it didn't matter because it was fun to play. You had explanations in all the right spots and they were all very easy to understand. The controls were very simple and simple controls on a game like this can make it a lot of fun.

Audio - Awesome again. Great music and great boing sound effects that you had. I can't find anything wrong with this either.

Overall, a fun game, which deserves a bit more attention then it has received. Good job.

C52

~ Review Request Club ~

Score: 5

"Not bad."

submission: Piggy123s NG guide

date: August 23, 2008

Animation/Graphics - This could really increase your score if you worked on this. Just the basic layout could of been much better. Things could of been a lot neater too like the arrows on the bottom of the page were very rough. Just working on this part itself could personally bring my rating up from 5 to 7.

Story - A guide is always a nice thing to have on newgrounds and I think the more the better just in case someone who doesn't understand some things. The wording could of been better in some parts. Is English your first language? If not then I totally understand, but if it is then you need to work on your grammar. Lastly, it kind of ended randomly. I think you need some sort of The End message like, "This is the end of my guide, thank you for watching".

Audio - Decent audio. I don't think that it really needs anything changed on it so good job here.

Overall, work on it just a little bit and this will turn into a better guide.

C52

~ Review Request Club ~

Score: 3

"Hm, I didn't like it."

submission: Wacky ball

date: August 23, 2008

Animation/Graphics - The animation was smooth, I can't complain about that any, but the drawings could of been just a bit better. It almost looked like you rushed when drawing. They don't have to be amazing, but they could of obviously been much better.

Story - There are a lot of ball bouncing games, but not many that interact with the environment. This would probably be a decent game if you made it work with the environment more and added more things to hit other then the sun and the sign. The buttons to change the color of the ball should of been off screen so they didn't get in the way of the game play.Also, I rather the screen be taller so we could see where the ball was going or at least give us a little bit more room.

Audio - Pretty decent audio. The song went pretty well with the game. Maybe you could of worked on adding some sound effects? Adding a little bounce noise or even some noise to the fire could of been pretty cool.

Overall, keep improving on it and the score will probably get better. Good luck to you.

C52

~ Review Request Club ~

Score: 4

"Well.."

submission: Newgrounds Sig Creator

date: August 23, 2008

I was all excited to check this submission out, but it really wasn't anything too great.

Animation/Graphics - While nothing was wrong with the drawing or graphics, everything was way to simple. Nothing exciting really. I was hoping for some color choice or some pictures to choose from, but it only really had the text and a small icon. Wasn't anything like a sig.

Story - Like I said with the pictures. This needs a bunch of cool pictures to choose from, several cool backgrounds, different colors, many different fonts, etc.. The list could go on forever. The idea isn't too bad, but it is really lacking.

Audio - No audio at all? You could of really went into it with some sort of background music, maybe a menu to select several different songs. You could of even went into more depth by adding a sound effect when you clicked a button.

Overall, a decent idea, but it needs a hell of a lot of work to be good.

C52

~ Review Request Club ~

Score: 6

"Not to bad."

submission: Tactical RPG - Warfare

date: August 22, 2008

How did this get turd? The game isn't that bad.

Animation/Graphics - Very simple, but you need to get better. This is one of your early flash animations so obviously you don't have much experience yet, but please keep working on them. The animation was rough at times and the game didn't always run smoothly.

Story - This is where I'm going to have to agree with everyone else. The ads went on for wayyyy too long. I waited a total of 3 hours until they were over with. A lot of money in your pocket maybe, but you had so many ads that it made it a tedious wait until the game started. It also made people think that there wasn't a game there at all. I also think that the upgrades in between the levels need to be worked on. Add more upgrades other then just health and speed. A strength one would be awesome.

Audio - The audio wasn't bad at all. It could of used maybe some nice elevator music for the ads because that's what it felt like when waiting for the game to actually start. The audio during the game wasn't too bad of a selection either. Maybe next time add sound effects.

Overall, you really need to get rid of the three hours of adds and just add a few things here and there to make this better.

C52

Score: 8

"Pretty decent."

submission: like a duck (colour)

date: August 15, 2008

Animation/Graphics - The animation and graphics were pretty good. They were fun too watch and ran pretty smoothly. I didn't really see too much wrong here if anything. Good job.

Story - Pretty decent. Again, it was a fun submission too watch. Not a story maybe, but not ever flash needs a story. It had pretty good length and everything else was alright.

Audio - The audio didn't always sync up with the flash too well, but it wasn't too bad either. This could of probably been worked on just a bit to make the flash better.

Overall, not too bad, but the timing with the audio could of been a bit better.

C52

~ Review Request Club ~

Score: 8

"WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS SHIT!"

submission: A Moonlight Sonata

date: August 9, 2008

Lmao.

Animation/Graphics - Pretty well animated. You do have a pretty good talent at drawing and I liked the style of the drawing. Animation was pretty smooth, but the movement of the mouth didn't always line up good with the talking or.... singing? I guess it did line up well with other things though. >.<

Story - Well it def. started off like it was going to be something kind of sad. It then turned into something that looked like it was going to be scary. It then... got gay, but I knew something was up when he started singing like that. I just didn't expect the whole dick in the mouth thing. So you get bonus points for the random twist in the story.

Audio - The audio was good except for the times that it seemed to lag and not be timed right with the animation. That's honestly the only place that you lost points from me.

Overall, a surprising story that doesn't turn out the way you thought it was going too.

C52

~ Review Request Club ~

Score: 8

"Not too bad."

submission: .::1200 FRAMES::.

date: August 9, 2008

Animation/Graphics - They aren't too bad. It was your own style, which is what I like the most. I get the sense that it's home made and that each of the drawings are yours in a way. I know they are yours, but they aren't generic is more what I mean. The dot in the bottom left hand corner that kept beat was awesome, but I liked it even more when in the very beginning the dots were random all over the screen.

Story - A bunch of random scenes that seem like unfinished work doesn't make up much of a story, but it does make for a fun submission to watch. The length was ok, but it was pretty short. I wouldn't mind seeing it just a bit longer.

Audio - I loved the audio that you used. Not only was it good audio, but it just fit the animation perfectly. I don't think you could of had a better choice here.

Overall, a short fun submission to watch, but at the same time nothing really too exciting.

C52

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