Score: 6

"Alright."

submission: The Last Hour: Chapter 7

date: August 28, 2008

I know you have a new one out, which is better then these, but I still have to review them like I'm trying to help you improve.

Animation/Graphics - The animation itself hasn't changed any. If anything there wasn't any animation at all in this one. It was just a picture with voices overdubbed and not to be mean, almost anyone could do that whether they had flash talent or not. I do have to admit that your drawing has gotten better since you have been animating this series though. Congrats on that.

Story - The same old same old again. This really needs more action and just plain more stuff. It's just two people sitting there sharing words. There just needs to be more then that and I hope number 10 is like that because it did win Daily 1st.

Audio - The voices, while weird, they are almost fitting and they are clear. I do understand everything that is being said. Everything else about the audio also seems to be fine.

Overall, I'm still waiting till I watch that one episode that really stands out. I hope I run into it soon.

C52

~ Review Request Club ~

Score: 9

"I liked it."

submission: The Very Best of Bahamut

date: August 28, 2008

Animation/Graphics - Just like almost all of your other work (Well since it is all of your other work in this case) the animation itself is very simple, but at the same time it's all that is needed and you find a way to make it work for you.

Story - I really like the idea of mixing up some of your best flashes all in one flash. Some of the transitions in between scenes actually made sense like that was how they were suppose to be. I thought that there was going to be a bit more explanation before the real things started, but there really wasn't. Too bad.

Audio - Well, all the voices are fine. We all know the one voice is annoying as hell, but it's suppose to be that way. Everything with the audio seemed perfectly fine.

Overall, a good flash with a good idea. If I had some more flash movies (not counting my games and quizzes) then I would love to make something similiar to this, but since I don't then that probably won't happen for a long time if ever.

C52

~ Review Request Club ~

Score: 6

"Not your best."

submission: The Last Hour: Chapter 6

date: August 28, 2008

I will put this first so hopefully you will see it. Please don't give me the copy and paste response like you do sometimes. Give me a real honest response.

Animation/Graphics - The craft in the beginning was very promising. The animation of that was very smooth and I thought I was going to be ready for an action packed movie, just to find out that it was another very short animation where the person talked for a couple of seconds, only having the mouth move.

Story - I still really haven't seen too much really. It's kind of boring and the animation itself is so short that you don't really know whats going on at all. I hope your future ones are better, but I'm sure they are since your latest one won daily first place.

Audio - The audio selection was nicely chosen, and the voices were.. alright, but they do need to be just a bit clearer in my opinion.

Overall, keep trying. You have improved more then any artist I have seen yet. Congrats on having this win Daily 5th.

C52

~ Review Request Club ~

Score: 9

"Nice."

submission: ÆÆÆÆÆÆÆÆÆÆÆÆÆÆÆÆÆÆÆÆÆÆÆÆW

date: August 28, 2008

Animation/Graphics - Great animation for a clock day submission if I may say so myself. The sprites were perfectly fine and I actually really enjoy watching sprites. There was nothing wrong with the animation or drawing and everything ran smoothly.

Story - I won't get to watching the other ones, but just by watching this one I'm sure I can imagine what they are about. :) A great clock day submission and too bad this one is the grand finale. You sure you won't get up to making another one for next year?

Audio - The audio you chose for the flash was perfect. When the battle started and the song picked up at the same time was really timed well and gave the movie a great effect. Good job.

Overall, a good Clock Day submission. Too bad we won't be seeing more of the series. Have more plans for next clock day?

C52

~ Review Request Club ~

Score: 7

"Random."

submission: [CC] Spirograph 2

date: August 27, 2008

I will first note that I haven't seen the first one, so I won't take any points away for it not really making sense to me. That wouldn't be fair.

Animation/Graphics - A lot better then half of the stuff that comes out on clock day. Decent animation and good drawings. The background of your user page was kind of different. I couldn't see really too much wrong with the animation itself.

Story - I can't comment on this yet. I probably won't find time enough to go back and review the first one of yours so I can't give you an honest review on this section. All I can say from what I have seen is that it is pretty random.

Audio - Good audio and the clock voice worked great with the animation. Good job on this part of the flash.

Overall, this isn't really an accurate review since I haven't seen the first, but I'm I can only do what I have time for.

C52

~ Review Request Club ~

Score: 7

"Funny."

submission: [CC] Pokemon

date: August 27, 2008

Animation/Graphics - I actually really like sprite movies, so I thought the animation was perfectly fine. I do though sometimes find the text hard to read because it moved too fast. If the text would of slowed down just a bit then I think that everything would of basically been fine here. The charging my lasers part could of been edited a bit better also, but hell it's a clock day submission right?

Story - A nice quick flash, but as soon as it started it was almost over. Just being a bit longer would of been better. I could actually see this being something decent if it would of been a bit longer and maybe the fight scene itself would of been longer.

Audio - I'm guessing decent audio selection for a Pokemon flash. I don't really know much about Pokemon, but apparently that's what it is suppose to sound like. >.<

Overall, not too bad. Maybe something that could be worked on and even be made into a series. Who knows.

C52

~ Review Request Club ~

Score: 6

"I guess everything was fine."

submission: Errors '08

date: August 26, 2008

Animation/Graphics - Very simple and basic. Not really any animations, but all of the picture were pretty clear and the text was easy to read. Everything also seemed to be a nice and neat lay out. Maybe add some real animation next time like a mouse moving and trying to click the No button when it's not there or something.

Story - Meh, I didn't find any of the errors very funny at all, but some of them I guess I can relate too. Overall, I didn't find the content too amusing or entertaining though.There needs to be something to keep watchers tuned in to the game.

Audio - Good audio on every part except for when you clicked on a computer type. You could of had music playing in those parts too because without the music it got kind of boring. Also, maybe add a couple of error sound effects when you click the next error button.

Overall, it needs a lot of work in my opinion to become an entertaining flash. Keep up the hard work though.

C52

~ Review Request Club ~

Score: 4

"Needs some work."

submission: The Halo Quiz!

date: August 26, 2008

Animation/Graphics - The drawings were sort of rough, but it kind of gave it that homemade feeling. If that was the look that you were going for then I wouldn't change the graphics really, but if you wanted to go for more of the professional type quiz then I would think that you should make it so the buttons are neater and that the text was a bit neater and more organized. Also, there needs to be some sort of background just instead of the white background for each slide. Adding just a small amount of animation to a quiz will give you a much better score also.

Story - Decent questions. I have never played Halo before and have never even watched someone else play it, but I'm guessing the questions were good. I made it to about question six before guessing one wrong and then I decided that I saw enough to review your quiz properly.

Audio - Needs audio. Just a simple background song would of also improved your score and rating. You could go deeper into the audio by adding a selection of several different songs or even a sound effect when getting a question wrong or right.

Overall, the quiz needs some work, but if you keep working on it then it should be better. Good luck in the future.

C52

~ Review Request Club ~

Score: 7

"There we go."

submission: The Last Hour: Chapter 5

date: August 24, 2008

This is the highest score that you have received from me to this point. :) I'm sorry that I called your first couple of submissions spam. You have improved greatly and if you keep improving like this then you will be pretty good at flash. Keep up the good work.

Animation/Graphics - The animation was actually there this time! It was just more then peoples mouth moving. People walked, their arms moved when they talked, etc.. Your drawing and animation skills have greatly improved also. By the time this series is done your last couple of episodes might be awesome.

Story - I loved the skip button and the intro wasn't too long this time. Good job on improving on those things. The length of your flash is getting better, but they just need to be a bit longer. That would get more people interested. I'm also still waiting for all of the action scenes. Hopefully some good action stuff will be coming up.

Audio - MUCH MUCH MUCH better. It didn't sound like you were verbally molesting the mic this time around and your voice was much clearer. Different voice actors, or at least a much different voice would help improve your flashes though.

Overall, you are getting a lot better at animating. Keep up the good work.

C52

~ Review Request Club ~

Score: 5

"You may be getting better..."

submission: The Last Hour: Chapter 4

date: August 24, 2008

But I still personally am not enjoying the series yet. I hope as you get better at animating that you think about coming back and redoing most if not all of these submissions.

Animation/Graphics - The same as usual on your flashes. What I would recommend is some more actual animation. Most of it is just too simple. It's more like a picture with the mouth moving. I want to see actual animation like people walking around and def. more exciting things like fights and battles.

Story - Like I said before this just lacks in animation to make the story any good. It's a great story, but you can't tell just by watching it. The introduction is still too long though and the flashes them selfs needs to be longer. Not the introduction. You are going to lose a lot of people in the intro itself.

Audio - THIS IS THE NEWGROUNDS POLICE BACK AWAY FROM THE MIC. Lol sorry I had to say that, but it almost sounds like you are spitting in the mic. Back away from it and just talk loud and clear. It should pick it up find. I hate every time it sounds like your blowing into the mic on purpose. Back up and this should be fixed.

Overall, not something that I enjoy personally, but if you think you are getting better then keep working.

C52

~ Review Request Club ~