Score: 10

"GREAT JOB GUYS!!!"

submission: Madness Regent

date: September 22, 2008

Animation/Graphics - You guys did a great job on all of the animation and graphics. The game play was very smooth an there wasn't anything wrong with the animation or graphics throughout the entire flash. There could be a couple of things like where the character jumps and a part of him goes through the roof of where he goes through the wall a little bit, but they were so minimal in number that it doesn't really effect the game at all.

Story - A great game. I died right after shooting the speakers off next to the clown, but I'm going to play it again because it was fun as hell. I need to see this game to the end! I wonder how long it is. Maybe something like health or powerups could of been added, but still a very fun game nevertheless without them.

Audio - Great sound effects and great Madness music playing in the background. I give props for you guys hitting it right on the nose.

Overall - A great game, which in my opinion is a lot more fun the the Madness Interactive game. That game was fun don't get me wrong, but I just had a lot more fun playing this one.

C52

Score: 10

"LOL"

submission: Fat Head's Reaction

date: September 20, 2008

Not only did your first one pass, which was just you being a webcam whore at you posted it up on newgrounds, but now your second one was posted up and it did even better. >.< At least this one had a title and a small credit screen unlike the last one. The last one was just a bunch of random stuff thrown together and this one kind of had a "story" or plot behind it. It did make me laugh a lot. Ha, I'm thinking you should submit one of these a week. Funny stuff man. (This is my roommate if you guys haven't already figured out that I know the person from how personal my review is). To believe that I voted 0 on the first one because I didn't think it was going to pass, but when I watched this one I thought for a second and since it made me laugh so much I protected it.

C52

Score: 3

"l...o...l"

submission: The Dot Of Excellence 6

date: September 20, 2008

Animation/Graphics - Terrible, but like I said in my review for your other submission I really do think that you want it that way. The only real way to improve your score vastly on this is to work on adding actual animation like things moving instead of a different screen every single time.

Story - FUNNY. It actually made me laugh a little bit and whenever a movie makes me laugh then I give it a few extra points on it's rating. That does mean though if it wasn't funny that your submission would of probably only gotten 1 star from me. So do work on other things like audio and animation without taking away from the humor of the submission too much. The text needed to be slower in some parts and faster in the others.

Audio - I didn't really like this voice this time around. It made it hard to understand all of the voices. I really think a voice actor or even your voice would be better here. That's just my personal reference though I guess.

Overall - Kind of funny, but still needs to be worked on to be considered good in my eyes.

C52

~ Review Request Club ~

Score: 4

"A lot better then the other ones."

submission: Wegra Adventure 5

date: September 20, 2008

Animation/Graphics - Well still terrible, but it's a lot better then what you use to have to be honest. The stickmen are poorly drawn at times and at others they are decent. I have a feeling that you want something along the lines of that though so I'm not really going to comment further one that. Also, I think two things that could improve your score by a lot would be making the background a lot better in each part and adding more actual animation. Both of these things could vastly improve on your score.

Story - A little funny I guess, but nothing too great in my opinion. A couple of things may have made me smile, but very little if they did. If your going for humor in your submissions, which I assume you are, then try and get funnier each and ever time. Everyone knows that great humor can really add to a submission whether the animation is or isn't good.

Audio - Decent audio in terms of music. I don't really like that voice that was used too much, but at the same time it's not terrible. Maybe start voice acting or get someone else to voice act for you? That would also probably help your score a little bit.

Overall - Maybe still a bit on the spammy side, but it does look like you are getting better so keep working.

C52

~ Review Request Club ~

Score: 9

"Wait a second.. >:("

submission: Mortal Kombat 1 Eps. 1

date: September 20, 2008

It's like I've seen this movie before. ;) Yeah, like two or three times when I was reviewing it for you in the review request club. ;) Oh, and I happen to like sprites. I actually just got the full version of flash and since I'm not good at drawing I thought I would start of with sprites. Was this hard to make? After I get decent with sprites (if) do you think that maybe you could help me out a little? Like over AIM would be the easiest, but I do have MSN. I just don't like to use it.

Animation/Graphics - Sprites and backgrounds that you didn't make, so obviously they are good. ;) Also, the the animation was usually good, but there were a couple of places where the movement was a little off. I noticed that one or two times during the fights, when they changed floors or levels, that the character would run off the side of the screen instead of jumping down, which would just make sense. The way they ran off the side of the screen just looked a little weird I guess.

Story - Two good fighting scenes here so good job. You even added a bit of story with the rolling text and added some text between the characters. I noticed you used the next button on one box of text, but not again for the rest of the submission. Was this because the first box of text was too long and you didn't want anyone to miss what was said? Sadly I find text like this to be a bit boring, but I will cover that in the audio section.

Audio - Great audio by terms of sound effects and backgrounds music. Is there anyway that you could find voices of the characters online more then what you had? It would be pretty cool, but doesn't sound like it's probable. What I do think would make the submission just a tad bit better is a narrator for the text of the stories. That would get anyone who was getting bored with the text and keep them into the story at all time. Other then that it's still a good job.

Overall - I don't see enough to give you a ten, but I don't see enough to give you lower then a 9 in my opinion either. Great job and hopefully you keep the good work up.

C52

~ Review Request Club ~

Score: 10

"Amazing."

submission: MGS: Flash Collab DISC 02

date: September 19, 2008

Animation/Graphics - You all had your own styles, which were all done very well. I love collabs of this size because of all the different animation styles that you can see in one movie. Some were better then others, but the overall quality was great.

Story - FUNNY SHIT. Well I didn't find them all funny, but I did find two extremely funny ones. The one where he was in the box and he just about shit his pants, which resulted in him throwing up was pretty funny, but when the guy in the mask threw up and filled his mask up.. FUCKING HILARIOUS. I don't remember who did that scene, but props to you. Also, the finishing scene (Why am I attracted to fart jokes? I'm 20 years old..) when he could barely hold his shit in was absolutely hilarious also. Props to made that one as well.

Audio - All of the voice acting and everything else audio related was great. There isn't much to comment on other then that really.

Overall - I can't wait till the next one guys! It's funny as hell and movies like this really make watching the portal worthwhile. Great job.

C52

Score: 10

"Well."

submission: I'm a fat guy.

date: September 19, 2008

I wouldn't give this submission a high score any other time, but you are my roommate and it was funny. It made me laugh and anytime something can make me laugh on newgrounds then I am forgiving on the rating that I give it. I can't review this like a regular flash animation, because this isn't a flash animation. It is funny though. Great humor all the way through. Some parts might have been a little boring, but most of it made me laugh my ass off. A lot of people that I showed back home thought it was funny too. Americas funniest home videos maybe? Ha, it might not win, but it's worth a shot. I'm happy you decided to submit this. :)

C52

Score: 10

"Ha, loved it."

submission: ifone

date: September 17, 2008

The score of 10/10 comes from the fact that I love these short animation with this style.

Animation/Graphics - Like I said pretty much one of my favorite types of animation. You haven't by any chance coed or collabed with LazyFeet have you? If so were you on the collab that we planned out about the commercials? We haven't even started if so. If not sorry for going off topic. Like I was saying, I love the style. The colors and backgrounds were nicely done. Also, the animation was smooth.

Story - A nice short commercial type plot here. Ha, I don't have an iphone, but I guess I don't really want to get one now even though this was suppose to be a funny flash, I'm sure some if not all of what you have said in the flash holds true to an extent. A nice little plot and good humor.

Audio - The voice acting, sound effects, and background music was all done very well. I don't have much more to say about the audio of the submission.

Overall - A great short animation. I liked the style and the humor. Good job.

C52

~ Review Request Club ~

Score: 7

"I like your art work!"

submission: PINEAPPLE

date: September 17, 2008

Animation/Graphics - I really like your artwork man. You have a talent there. Animation is also very good to be honest. Maybe it's a bit different then some other animations, but it wasn't that bad at all. The style of colors and drawing is interesting and I happen to like it.

Story - Ah, the only part that lowered the score of your flash at all. I understand not every flash has to have a story, but I don't know about a pineapple man walking to a point and then having the film reverse back and all those weird movements he started using with his mouth. It was very short and there wasn't too much to watch here, but again not every flash has to have a story.

Audio - Ha, untuned guitar is exactly what I heard, but it kind of went well with the submission to be honest. It gave it that "weird" feeling. A nice little selection that fits well with the animation.

Overall - A good show case of your drawing and animation skills, but nothing too great or exciting. Still enough to get a 7 from me though.

C52

~ Review Request Club ~

Score: 10

"OMG."

submission: Mario's Awesome Calc.

date: September 10, 2008

OMFG. That was absolutely amazing! Level 1 was pretty easy because... well everyone can do simple addition and subtraction, but then it started getting into multiplication and division on level 2 and I had a hard time getting Mario to the flag until I reached deep down into my memory banks and remembered that 4x4 was 16 BECAUSE YOU HAVE TO BE 16 TO DRIVE A 4x4! I never thought that I would use that in my life, but I guess I needed it.

Level 3 was terrible because I don't really remember percents that well.. but I managed to get the mushroom and I grew twice my size. I remembered that growing twice your size was doubling something so it was increasing by 100 percent! That obviously meant that I was 200 percent was my new size. WOO.

Level 4 though... I couldn't beat level 4.. WHY??? I kept trying and trying to divide by 0, but every time I tried a gumba would come out of no where and kill me. Oh well... Other then the last level, which seems impossible for some reason, this game was great.

C52