Score: 2

"Well it needs to be finished."

submission: fbf something

date: September 28, 2008

Animation/Graphics - The background was a little iffy in my opinion. Maybe you should of used something that wasn't so distracting as your background. The color of the lines were ok I guess. Anyway, this is about all I can review in terms of animation and graphics so far with what you have.

Story - Not much there yet. I think you were going to make a flash that consisted of a bunch of lines making random movements and random pictures right? That's an ok flash, but you only had a couple of seconds of it. If this was a preview then keep doing what you are doing and we will see what happens.

Audio - A nice selection of audio here, but I think you could of compressed your audio to make the file size smaller. I mean the animation didn't take up any file size as there is barely anything there at all so it must of been the audio doing it. Compress the audio next time unless it really makes the quality bad.

Overall - This needs to be finished before it can be given a really good review from me, but I did what I could with what you gave me.

C52

~ Review Request Club ~

Score: 8

"Pretty good."

submission: Nothing In My Way Collab

date: September 28, 2008

Animation/Graphics - All of the animation itself was done very nicely and I am impressed by it. The drawing went from very good to very poor at times though. This almost made me think that the style that you chose here was on purpose though. If it was then I guess nothing can really be fixed here, but if it wasn't on purpose then you could of worked on the drawing itself on may parts of the flash.

Story - A nice music video if I may say so myself. ^^ It had a nice pre-loader and very nice animated credits! The main part of the flash was well done and it went pretty well with the music. I couldn't find the Easter Egg the first time through and didn't feel like watching through it again to find it though. :(

Audio - The song went very well with the animation at hand and that is really the main point of a music video so this flash accomplished what it was sent out to do in terms of audio. Good job.

Overall - A pretty good flash. Too bad the other person couldn't get their part done, but it was still at pretty good length with the people that you did have.

C52

~ Review Request Club ~

Score: 10

"Well what do we have here."

submission: Corky52 birfday flash

date: September 24, 2008

Any other animation would get a three paragraph long review from me, but I'm not going to review this submission like other submissions. I really appreciate the birthday flash man. :) This is the third one that I had made for me today. It's been a good birthday on newgrounds and I really appreciate all the love that you guys have given me. Good selection of the audio too. I love Madness. :)

C52

Score: 10

"Amazing."

submission: Happy Birthday Corky!

date: September 24, 2008

You've really captured the feeling that Corky52 should bring to people. That feeling is a big powerful cock that puts people in fear of their life. >.< Thanks for the happy birthday flash man. I really liked it. :D

C52

Score: 10

"Omg awesome."

submission: Corky52's Birthday Collab

date: September 24, 2008

Animation/Graphics - This was the best animated movie I think I have ever seen on newgrounds. I mean I don't see how this couldn't be in the top 50 let alone the top 10 in flash submissions. :D Yoshi, yours was awesome, top work right there. MinusNick, you're just about the same with Yoshi. Amazing job. Let's not forget about FamilyGuy05! You three are going to be top animators someday. ;)

Story - MY BIRTHDAY HOW IS IT NOT A 10/10 AND A 5/5? That was friggin sweet. The pre-loader to starts was amazing. I love the picture that you used to fap... I mean the picture that you used on the pre-loader was an awesome choice. I remember taking that picture about a year or two ago. Yoshi, I love how you used the Pacman theme because I was talking to you about how I got bored in class and started to draw pacman stuff. :D MinusNick yours was really awesome also. Ha, again the pictures that you guys used were really funny. FamilyGuy05 added an important part also. What's a birthday flash without a happy birthday song to go along with it?

Audio - You all used great audio selections in your work and it all went along very well with the animation. :)

Overall - Thanks a lot to everyone who made this for me. I made sure I added it to my favorites and all of the authors to my favorites. This is the first gift that I have gotten today and it's much appreciated. Also, to everyone else. I'm 20 today.

C52

Score: 10

"That was awesome. Fucking sweet."

submission: With My Mind's Madness

date: September 24, 2008

Animation/Graphics - Amazing even though a lot of it was incomplete and very rough. I still thought the animation and graphics was a lot better then most of the other stuff that was submitted on Madness Day. I actually kind of liked the sketchy effect that there was, but I would also like to see the final version of it and compare the two.

Story - I think this is an appropriate question to ask why exactly did your flash auto-spawn popups? Someone posted it in the abusive review thread and I explained to them that you were staff on newgrounds and the popups that it spawned weren't really anything too worry about and that they shouldn't mark this to put it under admin. review. Now on to the flash, that was epic. That was such a powerful animation and I really got into the flash. That was awesome man.

Audio - A great selection of audio here and good sound effects. There really isn't much more to say about the audio selection of your submission.

Overall - Even though it was rough it was still an epic flash and really awesome to watch. Deserves a 10/10 and a 5/5.

C52

Score: 10

"Happy Madness Day 2008!"

submission: Madness- Confabulation

date: September 23, 2008

Animation/Graphics - This was actually one of my favorite animated pieces of Madness Day. If your other stuff is nearly as good as this then I might come back to your other work and check it out sometime. It was an original style of Madness in terms of animation and your different drawing style that was used. It doesn't really look like you used Madness sprites, which allows makes the animation fun to watch.

Story - A nice little background story behind this animation. There was also a nice change in characters from this animation that stops the over use of the same characters in every single episode, which can get boring as you can imagine. I wish the episode went on a little longer then it did, but I guess the length wasn't too bad.

Audio - Good choice of audio and good sound effects overall. Maybe the addition of voices in your next animations would improve the score by a little, but not always necessary in Madness animations.

C52

Score: 10

"Happy Madness Day 2008!"

submission: Midnight Madness

date: September 23, 2008

Animation/Graphics - Great job man. This is pretty good animation in itself, but isn't really any different then any other madness animation, which isn't a bad thing don't get me wrong. My computer is being very laggy today, but I'm assuming everything went very smoothly in terms of animation hence the high score and daily award that you have received here. You brought in some different colors and drawings that wouldn't be found in a normal madness animation, which I appreciate as a watcher because it doesn't make it exactly the same as every single other madness animation out there.

Story - A nice jump in the future here in your animation a pretty cool story line you had here. The ending actually left me pretty excited for the second part of this so if you wouldn't mind perhaps you could drop me a PM or something when it's finished and I will come and watch/vote/review it. Again, great job.

Audio - A decent selection of background music and all of the sound effects seemed perfectly fine to me so good job on this section.

Overall - A flash that I think deserves 3rd place more then it deserves 4th place, but hey take what you get right?

C52

Score: 10

"Happy Madness Day 2008!"

submission: Zero Madness

date: September 23, 2008

Free tens today. ;)

Animation/Graphics - Good job on the animation. A bit better then the typical Madness fan flash, but at the same time not as good as some of the other higher ranked madness animations. Still a very good job though. Everything ran smoothly and there wasn't really anything wrong with the animation.

Story - Hm, looks like I'm one of the few that didn't like the ending here. I understand time frames and all and I understand that this took you about two months to do, but I was still hoping from more. I haven't watched too many flash submissions from Madness yet, but just by what I have seen already I'm not exactly sure if this is worth the number three spot. Anyway, a decent story behind it and some simple humor scattered in.

Audio - Good sound effects and good music playing throughout the whole thing. There really isn't much more to to comment about the audio other then what I have mentioned.

Overall - A decent madness animation, but I just felt like this one could have been better and by reading your author comments it really didn't turn out the way you wanted it to either.

C52

Score: 10

"Happy Madness day 2008 guys."

submission: Dawn of the Madness

date: September 23, 2008

Animation/Graphics - Great job here. You really brought in some things that other madness animations were missing, such as very detailed backgrounds and characters, great animation and effects, and good color. The animation was very smooth and looks like it was done by an expert at flash.

Story - This animation also brought a plot into the madness series instead of just random killing, which don't get me wrong is still very fun too watch, but a story this detailed in nature was also very fun to watch. I actually liked it more then the non plot madness animations. I actually wrote a script to a zombie madness movies, which was never animated and if it was ever animated then I would hope it turned out something like this. Hell, maybe if you have time you wouldn't mind taking a look at it and seeing if you would be interested, but either way great job here man.

Audio - I was excited at first because I thought that you were going to include voices for the entire flash. If you would have included voices for the entire thing then I could of seen this having a score of 4.3 for a very long time. It's something I always wanted to see in a madness movie. Good sound effects and background music.

Overall - A great madness animation, which deserves the score it has gotten and the first place it has received.

C52