Score: 9

"Really fun game."

submission: Besieged

date: June 30, 2008

Animation / Graphics - Nice animation and graphics here. Simple and plain, but maybe something could of been added like the arrows that were shot or the things that were shot out of the cannon. That might of added to the visual of the game.

Story - I really like defense games, and I loved this one. The only thing that I would recommend is instead of having the enemies fade I would have a health bar, because a couple of times I could of won, but didn't notice the faded enemy sneaking off to my castle. I couple of more upgrades and towers would of also been nice.

Audio - The audio was good. Good sound effects of the towers going off and it seemed to run smoothly with the flash.

Overall, very good game. Good and difficult. I played for about an hour straight.

C52

Score: 9

"Good tutorial."

submission: Awesome Sprite Tutorial

date: June 30, 2008

Animation / Graphics - Something that I look for when rating a flash that is primarily text is how well the text is organized and how neat it looks. Since nobody wants to be reading something that is all over the place or unpleasing to the eye. Your text was neat, organized, and easy to read. Another thing was that you added pictures a long with your explanation, and even added some basic animation in the pictures them selves.

Story - Each step and section seemed to be very carefully thought out and each section went into a lot of detail. Not only was there a lot of information, but it was clear to people who might be new to flash. I know when I tried making sprites that something like this really would of helped, since I find it more helpful then other tutorials that I have seen on newgrounds.

Audio - I never like listening to an empty flash. I rather have some sound effects whether it's just a noise when clicking the next and back button to some basic background music to keep the watcher from falling a sleep or getting bored.

Overall, pretty good tutorial with a lot of information.

C52

~Review Request Club~

Score: 9

"I thought it was great."

submission: The Music Video Collab

date: June 30, 2008

Animation / Graphics - I like that every authors personal touch was used when making this collab. Most of the animation and graphics were well done, but I did notice a couple of areas where things glitched or were just a bit jumpy. Sometimes the drawing wasn't done the best, but for the most part it was.

Story - This is a pretty good idea for a flash. I liked how you had the Bios section so we could get a basic background of all the authors. I really enjoyed the stuff done by Simple-line. A couple of scenes could of been longer and a couple of them could of been shortened up.

Audio - Well there's not much to say about the Audio when reviewing a music collab is there? Of course your audio was done well. Good job.

Overall, a couple of changes could of been made to make it better, but it was a decent flash and I enjoyed it.

C52

~Review Request Club~

Score: 3

"I didn't like it."

submission: Dragonball Z Episode 2

date: June 29, 2008

Animation / Graphics - The animation was rough, and the graphics / drawings were also pretty rough. I really didn't find much enjoyement out of the animation department of this flash. Thinking that it was a Dragonball Z flash there would of been a little bit more action in it.

Story - I honestly couldn't tell you really what it was about because it really did bore me. I found myself losing interest pretty quickly into the flash and there wasn't any part to get me back into it.

Audio - The music and audio that you did have wasn't too bad, but I think it really would of made the movie more interesting if there were voices instead of text. This might of been one of the reasons I also got bored with the flash.

Overall, I really didn't enjoy the flash, but keep working hard and keep making animations.

C52

~Review Request Club~

Score: 10

"Damn review below me...."

submission: Jim and Pals Shorts: Ep 6

date: June 29, 2008

Animation / Graphics - Another animation that has very simple animation and graphics, but it really seems like that's the way it should be. Everything seemed smooth and ran together well.

Story - Very short, but so short that I didn't see it coming. Completely random and it makes me want to go through your other submissions to see how funny and random they are.

Audio - The voices were great and the sound effect of the explosions was great. Nothing wrong with the audio that I can see.

C52

~Review Request Club~

Score: 10

"I love it."

submission: Bahamut's Favourite PMs

date: June 29, 2008

I don't know that I can compete with AnalPenguinFarming's review, but we all can't be reviewers like him I guess.

Animation / Graphics - Simple graphics and animation, but that's all that was really needed for this animation. The colors and back grounds were fine and everything pretty much ran smoothly.

Story - I honestly loved it. I thought it was hilarious. I laughed quite a bit during most of the movie and I thought it was a very original idea. I've never really seen a flash movie made about a subject like this at all, even though there might be one out there. I just haven't seen it if there is one.

Audio - Good audio all around. The voices were good and all of the other audio was just fine.

Overall, a very entertaining flash. It gets my 5/5 and my 10/10.

C52

~Review Request Club~

Score: 7

"Would of been great."

submission: Free Falling Whale

date: June 27, 2008

Animation / Graphics - Great animation and great drawing. Pretty good all around. It might of been just a bit glitchy when the whale was flipping, but not to noticeable though.

Story - I'm sure this would of been a great addition to the Music Video Collab. Too bad you didn't make it in time though. Oh well, it seemed to pass all by itself. There was a bit of humor in it too, so that helped your score a little. I mean it's not everyday you see a whale falling through the sky.

Audio - This song couldn't of went any better with the animation. Good job.

Overall, it's nothing too great by itself, but it would of been a great addition to the collab.

C52

Score: 10

"Very fun."

submission: MIRC

date: June 26, 2008

Animation / Graphics - I saw nothing wrong at all with any of the graphics or animation. It lloked like everything ran together very smoothly and I couldn't find any glitches.

Story - As far as I can see this is a very original game. I haven't played another game like this considering the fact that you were using an object to force with magnetic power to destroy missiles. Yes, it was hard and challenging, but that is exactly what made it fun.

Audio - I see nothing wrong with the audio either. The background music was good and the sound effects from destroying the missiles to hit the grounds were also great.

Overall, a very fun and original game. Good job.

C52

Score: 7

"Nice beta you got started."

submission: Battle Engine Beta 1

date: June 25, 2008

Animation / Graphics - You already stated some of the glitches that I have found so I will stay away from that. I know you said that your real game won't have sprites, but it did look pretty good using sprites. As you said below me not too far your characters didn't move too much, so that is something to remember when making the real thing. Good luck with making your custom.

Story - This looks like it might turn out to be a pretty good game when you make it. I would love to see a leveling up system where you could upgrade certain statistics, etc.. That would get my 5/5 and 10/10 any day.

Audio - Nice music in the background. I hope the sound effects that you plan on putting in work out good for you too.

Overall, a good job on a beta. I hope the real game turns out good for you. If you end up submitting it to newgrounds give me a PM and I will be sure to check it out, giving it a fair review and score.

C52

Score: 8

"Pretty good."

submission: LOTRO - Swig & Toss

date: June 25, 2008

Animation / Graphics - I have to admit that this was very well animated. It was amazing. It was a bit laggy for me even on a fast internet connection, and turning the quality down low, but it didn't really take away from the game play.

Story - A very fun idea, just not very fun as a single player. I'll be sure to go and check out the multiplayer sometime when I have some free time, because I'm sure it will be even better. I didn't drink enough to pass out, but I had a hell of a hard time throwing the axe after a couple of drinks. That kind of made me laugh.

Audio - Great audio with the animation. It did lag for me so the audio was a bit off.

Overall, decent game with great animation.

C52