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I was hoping for a bit more of an evil song here. :( It started off like it was going to be evil and heavy, but after that it just.. wasn't. Oh well, the entire thing was still pretty good! I think that this would be a great song for a flash movie or for a RPG type game perhaps during an exciting battle or exciting part of the game. Pretty decent submission with good length in the song. Keep up the good work.
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Author's Response:
Yeah, I can see the evil that you're talking about, but that just wasn't a direction I was thinking of at the time. :D
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By reading your author comments I have noticed that this is more of a test then anything. Then I assume that the way it ended wasn't the way that the full version is going to end? I hope not because it almost ended in the middle of a beat and it did end abruptly, but again I will give you the benefit of the doubt that this was just because that it's a test. It may have been a bit repetitive, but the submissions wasn't too long so it didn't really make it bad in this case. If this is just a test then I think you have something to work off from here and that you should keep working on it.
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Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. Yes, this was just a test to see what my various new drum sounds sounded like. So I threw this together real fast, but didn't feel like continuing it. I uploaded it as a loop, but when I listened to it once it was finished uploading, it didn't loop the way I expected it to. So I went into the song properties and changed it from loop to song. But I think I just may finish this.
Thank you,
jxl180
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I liked the submission. I felt like it was a powerful submission. A couple of times it might have been a bit repetitive with the same noise over and over, but I don't think it was repetitive enough to take away from the submission at all. The song had a great build up and got really quick at some parts of the submission. It was a fast upbeat submission that could probably be used in a flash submission or two. Good job.
C52
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Thanks :)
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I don't think I really enjoyed it too much.. I just couldn't seem to for some reason. I thought the beginning was perfectly find, but it did start to build up a little bit, which did make the submission alright. After the initial build up it started build up again, which again helped the submission out a little bit, but it just seemed like either something was missing or that it just never got the that really good part. The song is in a mix between relaxing and quick, but never really gets to either of them. It's somewhere in the middle I guess.
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The introduction of the song, which was about the first twenty seconds in my opinion, was pretty repetitive and I thought that I was going to get bored quite quickly. It did pick up in the middle and seemed a bit "corky"... lmao I can't believe I actually use corky, but it seemed to fit in the situation. The end of the song was a little disappointing as it ended abruptly. I think maybe some sort of fade out or something else that wouldn't make it seem so sudden would make it a little bit better. Not too bad though and it is kind of a "fun" submission to listen to.
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Author's Response:
Yah I've actually thought about shortening the beginning ,and the end of the song is really the beginning of the second song they kind of string together to make one big song
Well thx for the review bye
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I really enjoyed it man! I love stringed instruments and this one made me remember why I love them. The entire things was great, but I just wish it was longer because I didn't want it to end that soon. This would probably go great with a flash submission whether it be a movie or game. Maybe a RPG game in my opinion, which would be really cool. This is almost enough to add too my favorites, but I just don't know. It's something that I will figure out. I think this def. deserves a score around 4 or above 4 though so I voted 5 for you. Good job.
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Well I could pretty much copy and paste the same review that I left on your last piece of work that I reviewed, but that is considered a plus 1 review and could then be marked as abusive. That in itself would tell you that I have the same opinion that I had on your last piece of work though. Everything was pretty much the same to me and it was still way to quiet for me to hear and enjoy at the same time.
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"I didn't really enjoy.."
I really didn't enjoy this submission, but that is probably be because it's really not my type of genre and it isn't my favorite instrument. I turned my speakers all the way up and could still barely hear it so maybe you should turn the volume up in the future so users can further enjoy your work. Again, I really can't leave any constructive criticism other then turn the volume up a bit because this isn't really my favorite genre and I really don't know much about it.
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I don't think I can turn up the volume any more. I can hear it just fine on my laptop speakers and when I use headphones, but maybe I have loud speakers for a laptop.
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This really sounded like an old fashion video game song. I think this would go great with an old style horror game or even some sort of old fashion RPG during a cave part or maybe even a battle. Great job. I'm starting to get interested in writing for a couple of RPG games so listening to some video game songs have been keeping me interested in the subject.
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I'm going to have to agree with everyone here when they said that the end was too abrupt and the static made it sound a bit bad. If you could work on the ending alone then I think the score of your audio would be much better! The guitar and the drums went together very well. The only other thing that could of been worked on a little bit more would be the length of the submission. If these things were worked on a bit then this would be a great submission.
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Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! But to be honest, I like my songs short and simple.
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