Score: 5

"Pretty messy."

submission: supa NES

date: October 1, 2008

The submission started out alright, but it got messy somewhere around the middle of the submission. I do admit that using the game system noises as instruments is original, but the constant noise of the coins was very annoying in my opinion. And the other ringing noise was sort of annoying also. Perhaps add some structure to the song and tone down those noises a bit. Also, towards the end of there really wasn't an ending to the submission. It just sort of stopped in the middle of a series of notes, but it might be ok as a loop instead.

C52

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Score: 5

"Hmm."

submission: Tomorrow Never Comes

date: October 1, 2008

Nothing too great really, but it wasn't really bad. I guess the biggest problem that I had with it was that it really had no structure whatsoever. It just sounded like a bunch of stuff thrown together all at once and was pretty messy in my opinion. The explosion sounds at the end were kind of cool, but I think you should of ended the song as the last one faded out.

C52

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Score: 8

"Pretty cool."

submission: But Who Will Save The City

date: October 1, 2008

This is a pretty cool submission. I wouldn't mind hearing what the song sounded like before you revised it because I'm sure it was a great improvement. This was a powerful submission just as you said in your author comments. I could see it being used in an action filled flash animation or perhaps a scene in a flash game of some sort. It's a fun submission to listen to. Good job.

C52

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Score: 7

"Nice job."

submission: Colossus.Ambiance

date: October 1, 2008

I do have to admit that the same repetitive noise over and over got annoying after awhile. I don't think that it's so much of hearing it so many times in a row, because it did fit nicely with the song, but I think it was because it was the same exact thing for the entirety of the song. Perhaps if you changed it up somewhere in the middle of the song that it would of made it a little bit more interesting to listen to and not so boring ot the listeners.

C52

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Score: 8

"Nice man."

submission: Boring Instrumental

date: September 28, 2008

I don't think it was too boring, but hey your opinion is your own opinion for a reason. I liked the entire thing actually, but I would have to agree with you on one fact. That this song would of been so much better if you would have included lyrics to it. I think you should think about including them some time and maybe resubmitting them. That's really up to you though. Overall, a pretty good song that probably would be even better with the addition of lyrics.

C52

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Score: 8

"Hmm, not bad."

submission: ([Faxing Berlin [Eigus Remix])

date: September 28, 2008

The beginning was alright in my opinion because it mixed things up a bit and gave it a little bit of variety. The song never really got to boring because of the fact that it was switching up all of the time. I don't think that I have ever heard the original so sadly I can't really compare your remix between the two, but maybe someday I will listen to his and be able to relate. I also didn't mind the ending because I thought the last note that it hit on lasted just long enough to make it so it wasn't too abrupt of an ending. Overall, not too bad of a song. Good job.

C52

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Score: 10

"Really good."

submission: Invasion 2.0 - Mjattie (NG)

date: September 28, 2008

I thought this song would be a beautiful piece for any type of flash game or maybe even some movies. I noticed an earlier review mentioned a game like Age of Empires and that's pretty much exactly the type of game that I was thinking about when I started to listen to this song. I can't really critique you on this song at all as I really didn't find anything wrong with it so my review is just full of praise instead. Good job. :)

C52

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Score: 6

"Lets see here."

submission: It's Finally Coming

date: September 27, 2008

I think in the beginning it was alright, but it was kind of plain and repetitive. It seemed like something was going to happen or change, but it just never happened really. Then it slowed down, which was different and it did sound kind of weird. After it was done slowing down it just sounded like a whole bunch of things thrown together and it made the submission sound a bit messy. Overall, the whole submission just seemed weird and out of place.

C52

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Score: 7

"Not bad."

submission: Simply Childhood ( teaser )

date: September 26, 2008

It was alright, but I just don't think everything really fit in the song. It was awkward to listen to at times, but I guess it does kind of go along with it in a sense since the song was a bit mysterious. It would be a pretty decent song for some flash movie that needed an ambient song though. I think this may go a bit better with a movie then it would go with a game, but that's my opinion.

C52

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Score: 8

"This was decent."

submission: Shades of Optimism

date: September 26, 2008

Congrats on having your submission being used on a game! The first thing that I thought when I started listening to this song was that it would probably be a good piece of ambient music for some sort of game. I'm sure that it will be used in games in the future. The whole thing was fun to listen to and it was very relaxing. It had a very nice fade out at the end of the song also. Overall you did a pretty good job on the submission.

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